is this slogan too long?
“Motivated to work on the Results you Desire”
I don’t it’s too long necessarily, but I do think you might want to revisit what message you want to send here… For example, do you want to tell people you will WORK on achieving their desired results or that you will DELIVER results?
It’s a subtle distinction, but an important one.
The idea here is not to brag, but I think this slogan is not trying hard enough to demonstrate value.
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